Rewrite as directed: (1) Hemingway’s novel is based on real events. (Convert the adjective ‘real’ to an adjectival clause) (2) He hooks a marlin but the marlin is too strong for him. (Begin with ‘Although’) (3) The reader can read his work again and…
Rewrite as directed: (1) Hemingway’s novel is based on real events. (Convert the adjective ‘real’ to an adjectival clause) (2) He hooks a marlin but the marlin is too strong for him. (Begin with ‘Although’) (3) The reader can read his work again and again and find new layers of meaning. (Begin with ‘On reading’) (4) As the novel progresses, the old man and the marlin are inseparably linked. (Use ‘progress’ as a noun) (5) Being strong, the marlin starts pulling the boat. (Insert ‘and’) (6) When I first read this novel, I was unimpressed. (Use ‘but’)